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Exchange 1, 1: That's funny. by *tiraldan:icontiraldan:


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Ok yeah. Part one of two. Round 1. For The Exchange!

(Edit: Here is Part Two. [link] )

Eren and Redrick are mine, Death is =mippins', and Edward, their amazingly horrific opponent, is ~Leohan's.

Leohan: Good luck! I hope I didn't screw up Edward's character.

~friesaregood, ~HealingCrane, ~BehindtheUniverse, *Ahm-Mahjick, ~Darth-Kyiser; thanks for editing help. Also ~LaughingAstarael for very-last-minute edits. And if I forgot anyone, tell me please. ;_;

if you see any remaining typos please tell me. Thank you. :thumbsup:

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:iconthreebooksinthefire:
...Oh shit. A DUPE KEY. THAT KIND STINGS WHEN YOU TOUCH IT.

D: I WANT MORE GO GO GO GO GO GO GO GO.

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:icontiraldan:
:heart: THANKS.

TIRALDAN has leveled up in CONFIDENCE. Her level is now ZERO rather than NEGATIVE ZERO.

See? ^

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Oooh, I'm looking forward to part 2. :)

I think there's a typo in the last sentence. Should "of" be "or"?

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"The hardest thing for somebody to do is to change somebody else's mind."
:iconthreebooksinthefire:
YAAAY. NOW GO PUNCH A CASHIER. THAT ALWAYS MAKES YOU BELIEVE IN YOURSELF :D

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:iconsun-shang-xiang:
Nice- I like this whole story. :)

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I am my own person- are you?
:icontiraldan:
Thanks. So you should probably be looking for part 2, then. Which still has to be finished....

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Awesome. :) Glad to please, sort of.

Nah, that sentence is just sorta awkward. :shrug: Not totally sure.

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:icontiraldan:
But the poor cashier...

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:iconthreebooksinthefire:
...ohthat'sright... Um...

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Punch... a pillow...?

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